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Didnt mean a thing to me by ~black-requiem:iconblack-requiem:





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Tie me to the clouds
Sky as blue as you

Float away as you drive along
70 and rising

Knees on the dash
Never meant to fall in love
Hate being your Mona Lisa

Fading like a distant light
Glue my mouth shut so i can't breathe
Place me next to you

Drive off
you are 70 and rising
escape your tormentors

Ward off ageing
with pulsating beats of your heart
and ice cream in the graveyard

lyrical frustration
Knees on the dash
70 and rising

count down
slow down
70 and slowly fading










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©2004-2009 ~black-requiem
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:iconunorthodoxfaith:
Thast weird...Thats cool, but weird. Such a unique style I like it!! Good job

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just pretend you dont drive
and have a seat on my bycicle
while my eyes strongly sing
dringaling dringaling dringaling
:iconflineagle:
wow, I love all you work, and yet this one speaks out to me...guess that says how sad my romance life is, but atleast my life life is on a roll, lol.

you rock!
:iconblack-requiem:
thanks

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:blackrose: Heather :blackrose:
`steal my words and i'll stab u with my pencil

[ .boredom.happens. ]
:iconblack-requiem:
:)
i think i love u. you made me smile.

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:blackrose: Heather :blackrose:
`steal my words and i'll stab u with my pencil

[ .boredom.happens. ]
:iconlapisdecor:
now, you made me smile too!!!
:blowkiss:
:icondan14lev:
aww thats really good....i would say some more editing to the pic at least. cool poem. it remind me of sumin sooo funny remind me to show u.

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:iconoceanbreeze:
This is pretty good! Though a little confusing
~E~
:icongemini86:
wow, this one show so much emotions and it hurts sniff:cries:

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